Greenham Industrial Estate 
Birmingham 
England 
Telephone 5454M Fax 56742 
Dear Sirs, 
Thank you for your
  letter of 10 October. We are surprised to hear that you consider our price
  for tin plate sheets too high. 
Much as we would like
  to do business with you, we regret to say that we cannot entertain your
  counter offer. The price we have quoted is quite realistic. We would point
  out that we have received substantial orders from other sources at our level. 
if you could improve
  your offer, please let us know. Since supplies of this product are limited at
  the moment, we would ask you to act quickly. 
We assure you that any
  further inquiries from you will receive our prompt attention. 
Yours faithfully, 
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Useful phrases 
Line 1 
We are surprised to
  hear that you consider our price for . . . too high. 
Line 4 
The price we have
  quoted is quite realistic. 
Line 6 
If you could improve
  your offer, please let us know. 
Line 6 
Since supplies of this
  product are limited at the moment, we would ask you to act quickly. 
Notes 
Para. 1 
Identify the reference
  and the product. Express your surprise at getting a counter offer. 
Para. 2 
Decline the counter offer
  and say why you are doing so. 
Para. 3 
Leave the way open for
  an improved offer and urge a prompt reply. 
Para. 4 
Do not close the door
  on future business. 
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 |
Comments 
The letter politely declines the counter offer and
  states the reasons why. At the same time the letter keeps the negotiations
  open by inviting an improved offer. 
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Alternative
  Phrases 
Line 1 We
  are surprised that you think that our price for . . . is too high. 
Line 3 ...
  we cannot consider your counter offer.  
Line 4 Our
  price is fair. 
Line 4 ...
  we have received large orders from other traders at our price.  
Line 6 If
  you could increase your offer . . . 
Line 6 Since
  supplies are short . . .  
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Declining a counter offer
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