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North Street
Chelsea
London
Dear
Sirs,
Thank you for your letter of 26 January. I
apologize for the delivery problems you had with us last month.
I have had a meeting with our production and
shipping managers to work out a better system for handling your account. We
know we made a mistake on your last order. Although we replaced it for you,
we want to make sure it does not happen again.
We have devised the enclosed checklist to use for
each of your future orders. It includes your firm's particular
specifications, packing requirements and marking instructions. I believe we
can service your company better and help your operations run more smoothly
with this safeguard.
Please contact us if there are any additional
points you would like us to include.
Yours
faithfully,
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Useful phrases
Line 1
I
apologize for the delivery problems you had with us . . .
Line 3
I have had
a meeting . . . to work out a better system for handling your account.
Line 8
. . . your
firm's particular specifications, packing requirements and marking
instructions . . .
Line 11
Please
contact us if there are any additional points you would like us to include.
Notes
Para. 1
Identify
the complaint and apologize.
Para. 2
Say what
action you have taken.
Para. 3
Introduce the
new system.
Para. 4
Invite the
customer to offer advice.
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Comments
The
company wisely admits its mistake. To reassure the customer,, it gives
information about the new system designed to eliminate errors in the future.
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Alternative phrases
Line 1 We offer
our sincere apologies for…
Line 3 ... to
devise a better system for . . .
Line 5 . . .
rectified our mistake...
Line 9 .... offer
a better service
Line 11 . . . any
additional headings
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Offering better service
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