Mr. J P Singh
Singh Trading Ltd
5 Patel Street
Bombay
India
Dear Mr. Singh,
Thank you for your letter of 6 June.
I very much regret the difficulties you have been
having with our company. I have investigated your complaint and have finally
discovered what happened.
Your original order was wrongly filed and although
your cheque was deposited, your order was never fulfilled. As you know, we
recently moved our office and our records were unfortunately in some
confusion.
In the meantime, we have discontinued the manufacture
of the machine you ordered. I am therefore enclosing a cheque for GB£800 as
your refund.
I am also enclosing an illustrated catalogue of our
current products and hope you might be interested in one or more of them.
Yours sincerely,
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Useful phrases
Line 2
I very much regret the
difficulties you have been having with our company.
Line 5
Your original order
was wrongly filed.
Line 6
We recently moved our
office and our records were unfortunately in some confusion.
Line 10
I am enclosing an
illustrated catalogue of our current products and hope you might be
interested in one or more of them.
Notes
Para. 1
Identify the
reference.
Para. 2
Apologize for the
problem.
Para. 3
Explain what happened.
Para. 4
Refund the money.
Para. 5
Try to sustain the
business relationship.
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Comments
The supplier admits all the fault and attempts to
repair the damage by immediately refunding the money involved. An attempt to
sustain the business relationship is made by enclosing a catalogue.
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Alternative phrases
Line 1 I refer to your letter . . .
Line 5 We wrongly filed your original order .
Line 5 ... we deposited your cheque...
Line 8 ... we have stopped manufacturing ...
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Admitting a mistake
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